Title: start/end
Author: jane d
Pairing: Tony/Tim
Rating: NC-17
This is a Tim POV story, totally stream-of-consciousness style, and I love the way he keeps getting distracted from himself and by himself in his thought process(I do that all the time!), and the fact that Tony had planned it all along but then couldn't just come out and SAY it - SO much love. Plus, the unconscious stroking with the thumb? I love how that shows that Tony's affection for Tim is so ingrained that it's subconscious (or at least that's my interpretation XD). The one complaint I have is that the UST was built up so well I wish I got to read about more sex! :D The ending left me wanting more, and in the best way possible.
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